The "evil" disciples are supposed to be ridiculously strong and cunning, creating powerful evil organizations but are entirely s*upid dunces and one-shotted by the MC within 1 chapter of him appearing in non-comical scenes. It's about an MC transmigrating into an OP/disabled body but constantly having to keep up appearances and show of strength, while desperately trying to regain his powers.Īnd yet it's utterly boring with no jokes. sometimes within the span of a single chapter) Makes it quite unreadable when paired together with rapid, random perspective changes (MC viewpoint -> Disciple 1/2/3 viewpoint -> Enemy 1/2/3 viewpoint -> Disciple 4/5/6 viewpoint. (2) Conversations are so broken that you have no idea what characters are thinking or talking aboutĮveryone constantly has different conversations going on at once, talking over each other with multiple connecting sentences being skipped. The deus-ex machina always appears at the last minute with the System giving MC some s*upidly powerful ability to break all plots against him. A traitorous disciple randomly creates a poor convoluted nonsensical plot to lure a fellow disciple (with the end plot being the lure the MC), but the MC comes out ahead of time by chance, but the disciple has an even bigger "fool-proof" trap for the MC, but suddenly it's revealed that MC knew all along what was going on.
Plot developments occur entirely randomly.Į.g. There are so many possibilities to game the system but MC doesn't bother exploring the limits of the system (unlike most other System novels). MC becomes a headless fly and has no real plan for developing it other than adopting a wait-and-see attitude.
more> and structure for the awards broke the whole novel. The MC's System is a decent plot device, granting the MC "merit points" for whatever random subjective acts it deems as "good", thereby pushing MC towards a good alignment.īut the absence of System rules. (1) Author has no idea where he wanted the novel to go See "Running Away from the Hero" (2014), "Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich" (2014), "Overlord" (2010).Ĭompletely broken writing and garbage plot logic. A disjointed, nonsensical novel that copies the recently popular misunderstanding tropes of protagonists transmigrating into OP evil arch-types with "evil" underlings.
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